October 10, 2024
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The table below shows the populations in Australia and Malaysia from 1980 to 2002.
【主体段分段】：
Body 1：total population，rate of birth
Body 2：male population，female population
Body 3：population aged 65+，average annual population growth
开头段
The table compares Australia and Malaysia in terms of changes in their population between 1980 and 2002.
概述段
Overall, the population size in both countriesincreased considerably,buttheir birth rate bothexperienced a slight decrease.Also, compared withMalaysia, Australia had a larger percentage of senior citizens in both years.
思路要点：
- 两个国家的total population都上升，但rate of birth都轻微下降
- 两年中Australia的老年人口比例都＞Malaysia
Body paragraph 1
Looking at the information in more detail, we can seethatboth countrieswitnessed a significant growthin their population.This is especially true forMalaysia, since its population sizenearly doubledto 24.3 million in 2002.However, the birth rate in both Australia and Malaysiaexperienced a downward trend,withthe formerfalling marginallyby 0.2 million and the latterdeclining more noticeably by1 million in the given period.
思路要点：
- total population：两个国家数据都上升；其中Malaysia数据几乎上升两倍
- Rate of birth：Australia小幅度下降，Malaysia大幅度下降
Body paragraph 2
In terms ofmale and female population, the figures in Australiaremained stableat 49.9 million and 50.1 million respectively.By contrast,there was a modest climb inmale population of Malaysia from 50.3 to 50.6 million,in contrast toa slight decrease for the female population in this country by 0.3 million.
思路要点：
- Australia：男女比例都持平
- Malaysia：male population轻微上升，但female population轻微下降
Body paragraph 3
It is also clear that althoughthe proportion of elders in both countriessaw a rise, the figure in Australia was higher than that in Malaysia in both 1980 and 2000.However, the reverse was true foraverage annual population growth — the population growth rate in Malaysiaoutnumberedthat in Australia in both years. The former nearlyremained unchangedat 1.2%,whilethe latterunderwent an insignificant dropto 2.1%.
思路要点：
- population aged 65+：两年内都是Australia>Malaysia，前者数据大幅度上升
- average annual population growth：两年内都是Australia
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